Purpose for writing: to inform others of our holiday using a 5 W poem
W.A.L.T use the correct tense in our writing
PAST
Crosbie
Looked at the penguins
On a very hot sunny day
At Under Water Kelly Tarltons
Written by Crosbie (who used ed to show it happened in the past).
PRESENT
Flynn and Daddy
Are watching the Rugby World Cup Final
On a peaceful Sunday Night
At our awesome home
We want to see the All Black win the Rugby World Cup 2011
Written by Flynn (who used ing to show it is happening right now).
FUTURE
Callum
Will run around the park
It will be a beautiful warm sunny day
In lovely Auckland, near his house
He will be getting exercise
Written by Callum (who used will to show it will happen in the future).
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