Wednesday 26 October 2011

Cystic Fibrosis Experimentathon


After a bunch of predictions, changing variables, and noting results we have figured out many ways to make bubbles BIGGER, smaller, more colourful and float for longer (just to name a few experiments).  

Thank you so much to all of those who donated money to our research - this is the last week to bring that money in.  So far we have raised $186.00 and we are so proud of that - we will be sending this money to help researchers help those with Cystic Fibrosis (along with a few poems which may be published in their magazine - stay posted).


Tense - Past, Present and Future

Purpose for writing: to inform others of our holiday using a 5 W poem

W.A.L.T use the correct tense in our writing


PAST
Crosbie
Looked at the penguins
On a very hot sunny day                          
At Under Water Kelly Tarltons

Just for fun
Written by Crosbie (who used ed to show it happened in the past).


PRESENT
Flynn and Daddy
Are watching the Rugby World Cup Final
On a peaceful Sunday Night
At our awesome home
We want to see the All Black win the Rugby World Cup 2011
Written by Flynn (who used ing to show it is happening right now).


FUTURE
Callum
Will run around the park
It will be a beautiful warm sunny day
In lovely Auckland, near his house
He will be getting exercise
Written by Callum (who used will to show it will happen in the future).